Urban Air Adventure Park: Difference between revisions

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==Membership Agreement Concerns==

{{Placeholder box|"'''{{PAGENAME}}''' is ~~a <ref name":0">ref goes here</ref>".~~ indoor sports entertainment company and an Unleashed Brands company.

{{Placeholder box|"'''{{PAGENAME}}''' is an indoor sports entertainment company and an Unleashed Brands company. The business focuses on indoor sports like ziplining, trampolines, GoKarts, etc.

The UrbanAir ~~Business~~ model is ~~focus~~ primarily on 12 months contracts for use of the Adventure Park, primarily with children as visitors.

The UrbanAir business model is focused primarily on 12 months contracts for use of the Adventure Park, primarily with children as visitors.

~~Exaggerated~~, but technically possible scenario that could happen based on the exact text of the UrbanAir Membership agreement, without additional consent or compensation.

The Problem:

This is an exaggerated, but technically possible scenario that could happen based on the exact text of the UrbanAir Membership agreement, without additional consent or compensation.

Your 6 year old child's photo can be taken, the plain white t-shirt they're wearing can be altered to say "Free Palestine", in front of a LGBT flag, standing in a gay nightclub next to Dylan Mulvaney, with a voiceover of your actual child's voice (or even another child's voice saying "I LOVE IT HERE!"}}

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 ==Membership Agreement Concerns==
-{{Placeholder box|"'''{{PAGENAME}}''' is a <ref name":0">ref goes here</ref>". indoor sports entertainment company and an Unleashed Brands company.
+{{Placeholder box|"'''{{PAGENAME}}''' is an indoor sports entertainment company and an Unleashed Brands company.  The business focuses on indoor sports like ziplining, trampolines, GoKarts, etc.
-The UrbanAir Business model is focus primarily on 12 months contracts for use of the Adventure Park, primarily with children as visitors.
+The UrbanAir business model is focused primarily on 12 months contracts for use of the Adventure Park, primarily with children as visitors.
-Exaggerated, but technically possible scenario that could happen based on the exact text of the UrbanAir Membership agreement, without additional consent or compensation.
+The Problem:
+This is an exaggerated, but technically possible scenario that could happen based on the exact text of the UrbanAir Membership agreement, without additional consent or compensation.
 Your 6 year old child's photo can be taken, the plain white t-shirt they're wearing can be altered to say "Free Palestine", in front of a LGBT flag, standing in a gay nightclub next to Dylan Mulvaney, with a voiceover of your actual child's voice (or even another child's voice saying "I LOVE IT HERE!"}}