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:#Under the '''Audiobook monopoly''' sub-section for '''Consumer impact summary''', there is jargon ("professional attorney valorations") that isn't sufficiently explained in the article itself nor the citations used (at least from what I could tell). I would go even further and outright remove the portion beginning with "leading to widespread criticism", since it's both {{Wplink|Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_watch#Unsupported_attributions|weaselly}} and duplicative of what's better demonstrated under the '''Punishment of non-exclusive deals''' sub-section (which itself could be renamed to something more neutral). | :#Under the '''Audiobook monopoly''' sub-section for '''Consumer impact summary''', there is jargon ("professional attorney valorations") that isn't sufficiently explained in the article itself nor the citations used (at least from what I could tell). I would go even further and outright remove the portion beginning with "leading to widespread criticism", since it's both {{Wplink|Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_watch#Unsupported_attributions|weaselly}} and duplicative of what's better demonstrated under the '''Punishment of non-exclusive deals''' sub-section (which itself could be renamed to something more neutral). | ||
:#The '''Products''' section is overly broad and has no citations. Until there is something to back up its premise, I recommend deleting that section. | :#The '''Products''' section is overly broad and has no citations. Until there is something to back up its premise, I recommend deleting that section. | ||
:#There is currently still placeholder text for the | :#There is currently still placeholder text for the '''Using credits to subsidize streaming service''' sub-section under the '''Incidents''' section, so that needs a summary even if its just one sentence. | ||
:#Unrelated to the tone and stub notices: The citations are placed such that that they are within punctuation instead of outside of it. This makes for both an unusual presentation and awkward reading. Placing citations ''after'' a nearby punctuation (e.g. end of a sentence) makes for a smoother experience. | :#Unrelated to the tone and stub notices: The citations are placed such that that they are within punctuation instead of outside of it. This makes for both an unusual presentation and awkward reading. Placing citations ''after'' a nearby punctuation (e.g. end of a sentence) makes for a smoother experience. | ||
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