Talk:VMware licensing change since acquisition by Broadcom: Difference between revisions
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:There are many more full-sentence instances of showing bias against Broadcom, and the overall tone of the article appears judgmental instead of neutral. More weight is going toward criticism of Broadcom instead of simply stating the facts of the case, which is completely necessary for incident articles. To get this tone notice removed, the article must be framed more objectively and fairly and should balance all sides of the argument while giving '''due weight''' to the issue at hand. More info on the [[Consumer Rights Wiki:Wiki content policies|CRW Content Policies.]] [[User:Beanie Bo|Beanie Bo]] ([[User talk:Beanie Bo|talk]]) 13:25, 7 September 2025 (UTC) | :There are many more full-sentence instances of showing bias against Broadcom, and the overall tone of the article appears judgmental instead of neutral. More weight is going toward criticism of Broadcom instead of simply stating the facts of the case, which is completely necessary for incident articles. To get this tone notice removed, the article must be framed more objectively and fairly and should balance all sides of the argument while giving '''due weight''' to the issue at hand. More info on the [[Consumer Rights Wiki:Wiki content policies|CRW Content Policies.]] [[User:Beanie Bo|Beanie Bo]] ([[User talk:Beanie Bo|talk]]) 13:25, 7 September 2025 (UTC) | ||
::@[[User:Beanie Bo|Beanie Bo]] Thank you for the extensive explanation, I have toned down the article with your suggestions. [[User:InTransparencyWeTrust|InTransparencyWeTrust]] ([[User talk:InTransparencyWeTrust|talk]]) 15:21, 7 September 2025 (UTC) | ::@[[User:Beanie Bo|Beanie Bo]] Thank you for the extensive explanation, I have toned down the article with your suggestions. [[User:InTransparencyWeTrust|InTransparencyWeTrust]] ([[User talk:InTransparencyWeTrust|talk]]) 15:21, 7 September 2025 (UTC) | ||
:::It looks much better now. I removed the tone notice! | |||
:::For Broadcom's response, I would suggest elaborating a bit more as a way to balance the article and show their side, a sort of "due process" if you will. This is a necessary part in creating a balanced, neutral article. | |||
:::Overall, your tone improvements helped a lot, and the article looks great! [[User:Beanie Bo|Beanie Bo]] ([[User talk:Beanie Bo|talk]]) 15:32, 7 September 2025 (UTC) | |||