User contributions for Keith

17 January 2025

• 16:0316:03, 17 January 2025 diff hist +77 Talk:Microsoft No edit summary
• 15:2715:27, 17 January 2025 diff hist +180 N Talk:Tinder Created page with "Reccommend moving most of the current content of this article into an incident page, potentially called 'Usage of dark patterns within the Tinder app' or something similar - Keith"
• 15:2415:24, 17 January 2025 diff hist +26 Microsoft edited some areas to fix tone, and left comments in others. It is important to write in a neutral tone, so that articles are credible. I reccommend reading Wikipedia's NPOV guidelines, which can be accessed via our Content Policy Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0515:05, 17 January 2025 diff hist +16 Microsoft added tone warning - article reads like the author has an axe to grind
• 15:0115:01, 17 January 2025 diff hist +21 Talk:Positive practices No edit summary
• 15:0015:00, 17 January 2025 diff hist 0 Talk:Positive practices No edit summary
• 15:0015:00, 17 January 2025 diff hist +491 N Talk:Positive practices Created page with "Have marked this as irrelevant, because unfortunately this is a topic which seems too wide-ranging and vague for the wiki, as well as exceptionally prone to brigading by those wishing to promote their own products. There are too many good products in the world to list them all in one page. The Q&A in the Mission Statement describes the only scenario in which we imagine products being mentioned as 'alternatives' Depending on further discussion, it will probably be de..."
• 14:5714:57, 17 January 2025 diff hist +15 Positive practices No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 14:5314:53, 17 January 2025 diff hist +723 User talk:Travis →Re: Your message
• 14:4514:45, 17 January 2025 diff hist +848 N Talk:Storefront shutdown Created page with "With this being a Theme article, could you provide a brief explanation (i've got no major issue with it, just want to clarify what it's about) over the ways in which storefront shutdowns can affect the consumer? While a storefront shutdown can be annoying, unless it affects a product a customer has bought, rather than one they intended to buy, I don't know how it should be treated. Physical and digital products are discontinued all the time, but it's not generally consi..."
• 14:3814:38, 17 January 2025 diff hist −180 Storefront shutdown Added stubnotice at James' request
• 14:3714:37, 17 January 2025 diff hist +205 N Talk:Eugene the contractor from the south of the USA Created page with "What's going on with the last paragraph here? If this page serves a point in highlighting what kind of issues shouldn't be in the wiki, then this should be made a bit more clear, and less 'messy'. - Keith" current
• 14:3114:31, 17 January 2025 diff hist +947 N User talk:Travis Created page with "Hi Travis - Keith here! I've noticed you've been building out CAT articles, but that there seems to be considerable overlap with the existing mission statement, how to help page, and other existing policy pages. Is there a reason why these pages are being written from scratch? I do agree that existing policy pages should be better organised into a category with their own headers (like the CAT: you've used), but I wonder if this could be better helped by you creating a s..."
• 13:5113:51, 17 January 2025 diff hist +424 Nintendo Edited some tone and text, and added to comments Tag: Visual edit

16 January 2025

• 21:5921:59, 16 January 2025 diff hist +329 Mission statement →Editorial Q&As: Added a Q&A about non-US articles Tag: Visual edit
• 15:2915:29, 16 January 2025 diff hist +16 Steam adding stub notice - this one needs a fair chunk of work
• 15:2915:29, 16 January 2025 diff hist +264 Steam No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 15:0215:02, 16 January 2025 diff hist +372 N Talk:Voice over LTE Created page with "I think this article could benefit from a more descriptive title (i.e. one which reflects the incident rather than simply being called Voice over LTE), as well as a summary at the top of the page to quickly get the reader up-to-speed on the nature of the indicent. The overall amount of content and level of detail and referenceing is, however, very impressive! -Keith"
• 14:3914:39, 16 January 2025 diff hist +1 Template:Incomplete →Notice: This Article Requires Additional Verification
• 14:3714:37, 16 January 2025 diff hist +11 Talk:Amazon →Worker's rights and this wiki
• 14:3614:36, 16 January 2025 diff hist +540 Talk:Amazon →Worker's rights and this wiki: new section
• 14:3214:32, 16 January 2025 diff hist −3 Amazon changed stub notice, edited preamble
• 14:1414:14, 16 January 2025 diff hist +24 m HP Instant Ink No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
• 14:1214:12, 16 January 2025 diff hist +69 HP Instant Ink edited a couple things for clarity/tone Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5813:58, 16 January 2025 diff hist +276 Talk:EULA roofie No edit summary
• 13:5513:55, 16 January 2025 diff hist +114 Talk:EULA roofie →Should this be replaced with something more internationally applicable?
• 13:5313:53, 16 January 2025 diff hist −24 EULA roofie →Consumer Impact: changed some wording Tag: Visual edit
• 12:0712:07, 16 January 2025 diff hist +2 Template:Incomplete →Notice: This Article Requires Additional Verification: a word
• 11:5811:58, 16 January 2025 diff hist +17 Template:ToneWarning →Notice: This Article Requires Change in Tone
• 11:5811:58, 16 January 2025 diff hist +1 Template:ToneWarning →Notice: This Article Requires Change in Tone
• 11:5711:57, 16 January 2025 diff hist +17 Allstate and Arity's alleged unauthorized driver data collection through mobile apps Certainly not the worst example of tone usage, but there's quite a few places where assertions are made in the Wiki's voice which should not be. Additionally, the usage of the word 'theft' in the title is problematic - 'theft' is a strong word to use, and alternatives such as 'data collection and sharing controversy' should be considered.
• 11:3611:36, 16 January 2025 diff hist +327 Talk:General Motors data collection and sharing controversy →Article name change proposal: new section
• 11:0311:03, 16 January 2025 diff hist +208 Talk:Meta →Article needs breaking down into Incidents, and probably product lines: new section
• 10:3010:30, 16 January 2025 diff hist +12 Consumer Rights Wiki:Moderator guidelines →D. Tone and Presentation: Tag: Visual edit
• 10:2610:26, 16 January 2025 diff hist +373 Template:ToneWarning clarified tone rules for theme and non-theme articles
• 10:2210:22, 16 January 2025 diff hist +2 m Template:ToneWarning swapped verbiage for 'word usage' (sorry Jace!)
• 10:2110:21, 16 January 2025 diff hist +15 Dyson No edit summary
• 10:2010:20, 16 January 2025 diff hist +16 Dyson added stub notice
• 10:1910:19, 16 January 2025 diff hist +254 N Talk:Dyson →Tone, and page structure: new section current
• 08:5008:50, 16 January 2025 diff hist +47 Talk:Chase Bank No edit summary

15 January 2025

• 23:4323:43, 15 January 2025 diff hist −1 m Mission statement spelling Tag: Visual edit
• 23:4123:41, 15 January 2025 diff hist +175 Ubisoft →Anti-consumer practices: changes some wording, and made edits to the clause waiving section Tag: Visual edit
• 23:2823:28, 15 January 2025 diff hist −1 Template:StubNotice →Notice: This Article Requires Expansion
• 23:1623:16, 15 January 2025 diff hist −2 Template:StubNotice →Notice: This Article Requires Expansion: grammar
• 23:1523:15, 15 January 2025 diff hist 0 Disney No edit summary Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 23:1523:15, 15 January 2025 diff hist +140 Template:StubNotice →Notice: This Article Requires Expansion
• 23:1223:12, 15 January 2025 diff hist −105 Disney →Forced Arbitration of a Wrongful Death Lawsuit: tidied up language relating to the forced arbitration incident. Tag: Visual edit
• 23:0623:06, 15 January 2025 diff hist +225 Valve removes arbitration requirement from Steam Subscriber Agreement →An exclusively positive event: left comment Tag: Visual edit
• 23:0123:01, 15 January 2025 diff hist +14 User:Keith No edit summary current Tag: Visual edit
• 22:1822:18, 15 January 2025 diff hist +19 Mission statement →Factual, non-accusatory, and legally safe Tag: Visual edit